Friday, August 29, 2008
George Orwell
Lamott and Orwell response
Thursday, August 28, 2008
This isn't a "Shitty First Draft"
For the most part, I agree with the statements made in "Shitty First Drafts" except that I usually, and mistakenly, think that what I write the first time is pure gold. Only later, when rereading the assignment, at some other time that isn't two in the morning, do I realize that what I have written is trash. Don't get me wrong. There are bits and pieces that are decent, even worth salvaging. But overall, what I produce is usually incoherent, padded out, and grammatically an insult to the english language. Unfortunately, laziness has set of precedent of dominating my schoolwork. Therefore, most of the papers I have handed in have been this sort of "shitty first draft."
George Orwell's "Politics and the English Language" highlights several awful strategies in writing that, I have to admit, I am sometimes guilty of using. The example that I relate to the most was best stated when Orwell wrote, "A mass of Latin words falls upon the facts like soft snow, blurring the outline and covering up all the details." Too many times, I have been assigned a paper I don't care about and purposefully written just enough more than the minimum length to slip through the cracks and avoid further scrutiny that shorter papers may receive.
In consideration of readers, the above statements are second drafts.
Response to George and Anne
"It's a beautiful thing, the destruction of words."
My Analysis on Orwell & Lamott
While I was reading Lamott's passage in the book, I found myself in the same exact situations when I would start writing a paper. Its always a hastle to start off with a first draft because you knew that it was going to be a "shitty one." Then once you finish that part you have to go through it again to make sure you got all your mistakes corrected and you added some important things here and there. Lastly, you have your completed final draft and you feel great becuase you know you perfected it to the greatest of you ability and it has been a sugnificant accomplishment. I agree with Lamott, you have to start off somewhere even it takes some "shity" rough drafts, your final outcome will turn out to be a masterpiece.
Response to Orwell and Lamott Essays
Orwell/Lammott
Response to Lamott and Orwell
Orwell and Lamott
Orwell/Anne Lamott Reading
Response to Lamott and Orwell
First, Lamott. I found myself agreeing with this essay from the beginning. I know that when I write for school, I start out with an idea that I am relatively sure of, but while I write that idea changes; it isn't actually fully formed and solidified until that paper is done, so that first paper ends up being nothing more than a physical record of my thought process. The first draft should always be one's thoughts about a subject spewed onto paper, so that they can be gathered together into a comprehensible idea or argument and served up on a beautiful, polished platter of good writing in the second or third draft.
Now, Orwell. I found evidence to support Orwell's case in my own education. I have always been good at the sort of elevated but empty wordplay that Orwell complains about. It was inherited from reading modern books, as that is how I first learned to write. A young person learns by copying, so I copied phrases and big words and used them in my essays for school. These big words and tired metaphors were rewarded by teachers who were grading for coherent sentences and grammar, and not for ideas. This sort of writing blurs worthy ideas in a misty grandeur so that the reader cannot fully make them out. Which is a shame, because those ideas can be very valuable.
This is the second draft of this post, you can see the first draft in Lamottian style posted below as a comment. It seemed appropriate to the reading.
Orwell and Shit (...ty First Drafts)
Personally, I loved both of them. They each presented really good points while maintaining a level of humor that made me laugh out loud at times. As a writer, I really appreciated the advice I found in both; Orwell's was technical, and Lamott's was more emotional, but they were equally inspiring. I've always been the type of person to write one draft of an essay and turn it in for an A, but that probably won't fly in college, so let's hope I can work on that. Some of what Orwell was talking about is so ingrained in our language at this point that I'm not even sure when or if I'm breaking his rules. I wish I could show him what language is like today so I could see his reaction, though, because I think it's hundreds of times worse. If he saw how much people overuse - and misuse - metaphors and the like, I think he'd be rolling over in his grave.
Wednesday, August 27, 2008
Alejandro Raoul Solano
ME...
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Tuesday, August 26, 2008
What's up everyone!
Hello!
Why hello there.
Well, where do we begin? I'm Nick Longley - writer, musician, gamer, digital artist, otaku. I was born in Scottsdale, Arizona, but I moved to California when I was about 10. I've always been very quiet in real life, but I'm pretty different online; I tend to voice my opinions very loudly over the old 'tubes.
As I said before, I enjoy creative writing (I've been working on a novel for a long time), and I play piano and tenor saxophone - though here at Chapman I have access to neither so I'm sure my skill will go down the drain. I'm self taught at piano, and I pretty much just play video game music. I called myself a digital artist, but that's an exaggeration. My major is Digital Arts, but I'm not very good at that kind of thing on my own. I mean, I've messed around with some programs and made some stuff, but it's no big deal.
Hm...What else...There are few things that'll get me talking a lot in real life if I don't know you very well, but video games and anime are two of them. If you don't know what an otaku is (I mentioned it near the beginning if you forgot), it's basically a Japanophile. If you want to know what games / anime I like, the list would be too long for me to type out, so just ask me personally. I've been studying Japanese for a few years (I took a year-long break and since I had no way to use it I forgot a lot of it) and if I could have my wish it would be to work at a game company in Japan, like SquareEnix or Team Ninja of Tecmo, or maybe even Konami.
I guess that's about it, hopefully this wasn't supposed to be in some formal format or I'll be pretty screwed. I do however at least hope that we're forced to write with good grammar and not 1337-sp33k or AIM-grammar, 'cause that kind of stuff drives me up a friggin' wall.
See you guys tomorrow.
Edit: I forgot all about adding hyperlinks so I added some.