I agree with Nick, in that unfortunately the English language has sunken further into an inarticulate mess. In a sad way I find it almost funny, because the problems of language that Orwell is speaking out against seem like such dignified complaints compared to how language has become today. However, his principles of literacy and proper diction still hold true if anyone expects good writing to exist. I've never felt like I was one to come up with good metaphors, or to find the right places to use them without sounding either pretentious or overzealous. But I think Orwell did an excellent job in explaining clearly how to overcome those common obstacles. Which leads me to Anne Lamott's reading....
I read her excerpt immediately after Orwell's, and I found myself looking for the flaws Orwell had pointed out, in Lamott's writing. Surprisingly, I came to find that she adhered quite well to his guidelines for successful writing, and I noticed how doing so made her book an enjoyable read.
In the past I too have been guilty of writing only one draft of essays. I've always done well in high school english courses, but I've certainly gotten frustrated when trying to express my thoughts without the trial and error process. Also, I have to admit that there is a growing trend of expecting students to use big words and 'scientific' sounding phrases, that many high school teachers are following. I personally wrote a lot of papers that had overly used phrases and words in my high school essays, because I knew it was what my teachers wanted to see. I'm glad that this class is asking for a change in direction though.
Hopefully these lessons will stay with me for some time, so I can really digest them and become a more veritable writer. Maybe I'll get better at thinking of creative and appropriate metaphors to use as well.
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A bit blocky - try to break up the text a bit more - but you're right on with the expectations of high school teachers wanting you to sound high and lofty, but not caring for the beauty, precision, and conciseness of language.
I indented several times but I guess that didn't come through in the final post?
That's good to know. I guess from now on I'll return a whole line instead of indenting just to be sure my paragraphs are noticed.
Thanks
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